Some people think that cities are the best places to live. Others prefer to live in a rural area. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some individuals suppose living in the countryside is the best area, while others prefer to live in the megacities. Both groups have some rational reasons which will be discussed in the following.
As a matter of fact, the second group mentioned two main reasons for residency in large cities. Firstly, they believe the best job opportunities are been found in the cities. In fact, numerous factories, companies and departments have been established in cities and thus individuals especially those with academic degrees can be hired there and promote their lifestyle. Furthermore, a variety of facilities are provided in metropolitan area. To exemplify, the equipped hospitals and heath care systems, the academic centers including colleges and universities, the shopping complexes are concentrated and accessible in big cities.
Nevertheless, some people prefer to live in remote area as some reasons. Firstly, they feel living in countryside is healthier as no air pollution and traffic are there. Furthermore, they think they can decrease anxiety and stress in the farming land, far away, noisy and inconveniences sounds in the cities. Although, this opinion might be right, it should not be overlooked that rural people especially those who live in developing countries also encounter some issues. To exemplify, they must hardly work to cultivate their crops and breeding the livestock.
To conclude, I am of the opinion that living in both areas have some benefits and demerits. It is the everyone’s choice to consider all aspects and settle in the best area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...centrated and accessible in big cities. Nevertheless, some people prefer to live...
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Suggestion: I
... breeding the livestock. To conclude, I am of the opinion that living in both a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, second, so, thus, while, in fact, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36437246964 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94399638043 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595141700405 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0442767394 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6428571429 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337221772641 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111881593689 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122819742904 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222656813646 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114401696887 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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