Distance learning programmes are in trend. However, people think that this is a poor substitute for attending a university or college. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
For many years education has played key role in individual development. But, In past few years distance learning has become popular and act as alternative to University or College education. I strongly disagree this fact and we will discuss same in this essay.
Firstly, studying remotely requires lots of self-discipline. For example, students enrolling for online course has to make sure they spend a predefined amount of time everyday and this is the most cumbersome task if students lacks self-motivation or is not interested. On the other hand, enrolling for University or College course put peer pressure on people to attend class regularly as per time-table everyday and this contributes to growth. To add more to this online or distant course cost's less compared to full-time course and this is again the driver for attending actual classes.
Secondly, students learning on their own are not socially good as interaction with other student is less which affects them intellectually as well. Contrary, those who attend colleges or university has lots of interaction with others on day-to-day basis which not only helps them in what they are studying but also develop good network and grow intellectually. This is really important as competition has grown a lot between people. For example, person who is studying alone at home may turn introvert as compared to other who is studying in college.
In conclusion, though distant learning seems lucrative as it is self-paced and economical. But, value it add as compared to full-time education is not so much.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... they spend a predefined amount of time everyday and this is the most cumbersome task if...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ttend class regularly as per time-table everyday and this contributes to growth. To add ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eally important as competition has grown a lot between people. For example, perso...
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Message: Did you mean 'adds'?
Suggestion: adds
...elf-paced and economical. But, value it add as compared to full-time education is n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22134387352 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95889338623 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588932806324 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6786841022 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.615384615 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189275009848 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061551170473 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419674654056 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102301852575 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496037915958 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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