Do you think consumer should avoid over packed products or it is responsibility of producer to avoid extra packaging of products?" Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is the packed items which are widely available in the shelves of every supermarket. There is widespread worry that would only lead to myriad of concerns for our society. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious considerations.
There is a deluge of arguments in favor of my response. The most preponderant one is the effects on our ecosystem because of over packaging of products as consumer dispose packing leftovers in the garbage and most of it can’t be recycled or reused. Moreover, recent research by national geographic revealed that most of world’s oceans, lakes and water reservoirs are getting contaminated and dirtier because of pile wrappers of food and other packaging materials which are not soluble or biodegradable. Therefore, needless to say that all these demerits have a far reaching impact on the world.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is about health, it has also seen that packed items such as packed food in tins causing health concerns. For instance, a recent study suggests that canned food item are the major reason behind food poison and cancer in most of the patients in US. For that reason, it is apparent that why many are not in favor of the over packed products.
In view of the arguments explained above, I pen down saying that over packed items are not only costly but causing huge damage to our society, thus, the impacts are too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98795180723 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73886160316 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59437751004 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2160410713 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.909090909 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105844436802 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364510662786 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439442767119 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607727902688 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263647537714 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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