Do you think it is better for students to work before their university study? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.
study? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.
Nowadays, the world of education is a platform for students to be more aware of what the outside world is. Having a part-time job before graduating has been entertained by the college itself, where the only motto is to make pocket money, which I strongly disagree with. Here I’d like to explain why.
The most essential for a child is to give education, teachers and parents are striving hard towards this. Enlightening a student is the basic foundation of the schooling system, whereas pressurizing them to be informed of the world and trying to fetch a job is all needed. Probably, is unhealthy for the individual, as aforementioned, it is the time to learn and improve. An academic program, intended to provide students with skills leading directly to a specific job. To emphasize this, if a learner applied for higher education and propelling himself to gain knowledge as he is passionate about, during this period its prime to be fully engaged. Or on the other hand, obtaining an occupation prior to completion of learning, they are on the verge of money-conscious which leads to lack of knowledge.
To conclude, acquiring insight is the key principle of a collegian, and can possibly graduate with wonderful colors, and besides could be a good service to the world of illiterate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Study
study? Why? Use reasons and specific example...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
...s the key principle of a collegian, and can possibly graduate with wonderful colors, and bes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99122807018 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91199005102 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9029666605 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.454545455 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161327566986 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609656146851 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102699507586 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14890501306 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.184248528116 0.056905535591 324% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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