Due to the increasing density of living areas in a city, most residents are suffering from physical and social dangers. Consequently, they are against living in the city.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Due to a vast increase in the population in a city, there is a abundance of dangers that face residents physically and socially, so few are against to live in urban areas. I completely agree with the above statement, where it effects on health and the economy.
people are more interested in accommodating in availability of high facilities such as, education, employment and other resources. But, there are many disadvantages that will have an effect on health. In high technology city many transport facilities are available, which increase in traffic congestion, and also increase pollution. due to this it effect on the health of the people who live. For instance, recent survey states that residents in city areas have more health problems such as, heart diseases due to the environmental changes. Additionally, it also effects on mental disturbances due to noise pollution.
Furthermore, it also has an impact on the economy. due to high population expenses are increased and rural people cannot rent a house in a city due to their low income, and cost of the goods they purchase are expensive. For example, a product is very cheap in rural areas than compared to urban areas, which is quite expensive. In addition to this, society is different from village areas, because urban people do not believe in supernatural abilities. Thus, living in well developed area has many negative aspects, and cannot live in an efficient way.
To conclude, I completely agree that high populated areas have drawbacks in terms of physical healthh like diseases, and socially with respect to the economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14122137405 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89222578477 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545801526718 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0505297986 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2142857143 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251007952589 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793698556285 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068953242909 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161111910201 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068392084699 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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