Many of the world's cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage.
What are some of reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest?
In last few decades population of world had became almost double. Population is increasing tremendously and major reason is advancement in health and medicine have reduced mortality rate and reduced survival of infants. Increasing population have several demands like food, shelter and clothing. Many green evolution have given food quantity to large population. The problem of clothing was solved by discovery of different fibres.
There are many reasons why shortage of housing occurred. Earth has limited crust surface. It cannot be reduced or increased. Most of the development occurred in cities having abundant natural resources. Developing cities need more working people and working people need house to live nearby work stations. As land is limited initially houses were build as demand of land increased and houses were demolished and apartments were constructed. As standard of living increased the cost of living also increased. Increased GDP increased cost of housing. This pinnacle of housing cost is not affordable by comman man. The industrial and technology progress giving more chances to earn for living increased crowd in cities.
Finding solution is hard for this problem then also we can try to find some. Firstly we have to increase the number of apartments having more number of Flores. secondly we have to find uncultivable and arid land surrounding the cities. Some marshy places can be filled by the garbage that produced in city. This is called as land filling. This new new land can be used for building new housing facilities. Furthermore government should apply some rules like restriction of on establishment of new business in cities while promoting it in villages nearby.
Village are behind in progress from cities so many young people have migrated as well as are attracted towards city life. Promoting progress in villages might stop increasing housing shortage and above solution will be useful to get rid of this problem up to some extent. . The main solution awareness
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.321875 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70229065477 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6711657846 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.12 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197953140611 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535567931898 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565141572634 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118726685092 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048445252796 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.