during a recent job plane journey, you sat next to businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. you talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one oh his restaurant.
write a letter to this businessman, in your letter:
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for this job
Dear jhonny
I write this letter, because of your suggest which I have a chance to work in your restaurant and you suggest me to contact you about a possible job in one your restaurants
we met at train a week ago at 07:00 pm and we talk anything else such as business or education. I am graduated from university which has relevant cooking with. It was so amazing to meet you that have a number of restaurants and you manage it.
Cooking is my majority and my special skill that is my hobby. Every single day, I always attempt to a new receipt and write in note. Sometimes when I cook too much desert, I will give to next my room apartment or friend. Working in the big restaurant is the big dream for me especially style of menu in your restaurant.
Every single time, I always learn about dish concerned taste in our country and try to attempt some ingredients. It is possible to attract people with a new food’s taste.
Thank you very much
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 177.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39548022599 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49098089031 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632768361582 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.62129842 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 7.06120827912 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268545277683 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781033127897 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100271521981 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16035801215 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171603415688 0.056905535591 302% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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