Each year, the crime rate increases.
What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Around the world, the crime rate has been increasing every year although, there are strict laws and rules in every country. The main cause of crime is due to a difference in thinking between people, invention of guns and bomb which makes easier for people to do the crime. In order to decrease the crime, strict laws should be implemented.
On one hand, people are getting cruel and they want to win the victory and they are ready to do crime in order to win. Some people are forced to do crime because they are poor and to survive they unintentionally do wrong things. For example, in poor countries, they do not have free health facilities and if their children are sick then their parents will be forced to steal if don’t have enough money for their child treatment.
On the other hand, crime can be prevented in different ways such as by initiating very strict rules and laws so that people will think twice before doing any crime and in order to prevent people from creating the mistake government should look after the basic needs of the citizen so they will stop doing crime . Import and export of weapons and giving license for general people should be restricted so it will help to prevent crime to some extent.
As a whole, we can say that if people should be aware the consequences of results and punishments whenever any crime is committed by an individual then this will definitely help to reduce crime. At end of the day, all are human beings and they should enjoy their life by doing good things for the society and people after all everyone will die one day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e after all everyone will die one day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, after all, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6161971831 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30097868829 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3320293478 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.1 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179500038444 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869599070823 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418110676168 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123948070319 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448052230144 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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