In this competitive era, education plays an indispensable role not only in the growth of an individual but for society too. so, according to some poor elderly people should be provided with funds regardless of their age. In my opinion, I disagree with this statement because students are the backbone of any nation and should be allowed all the benefits provided by the government.
One reason to not to see eye to eye is that adults learning at a later stage have less memorizing capability. As a consequence, they might not be able to apply the intelligence systematically. In addition to this, at present, many poor children are prevented from entering schools due to their financial conditions. If, however, funds are provided to them they can bring advances to the nation and more skilled persons would be there.
Another point to consider is that IQ level of adults are almost half of the children and consuming money on them will be detrimental. For instance, a book by Dr. APJ Abdul Kalam had mentioned that the development of any nation starts from the young age because they have the future in their hands of any kingdom.
Finally, funding would help in the long run for the simple reason is that it would open up to the wider section of the population. This would result in increasing the number of educated people. In other words, more skilled professionals can bring rewards to society.
In conclusion, education is must for any nation that wishes to grow. In short, youngsters must be funded more as they could help in the long run rather than elder people just learn to read or write.
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- The education of young people is the main priority in all over the world. Some people believe education of young adults who cannot write or read is essential for the society and more funding should be made available for it. To what extent do you agree or 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...h of an individual but for society too. so, according to some poor elderly people ...
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Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ust for any nation that wishes to grow. In short, youngsters must be funded more a...
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Line 9, column 111, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...n short, youngsters must be funded more as they could help in the long run rather ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in short, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79856115108 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67236895284 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.904624078 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216201326879 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675784423505 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441498685658 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116063507407 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550524173168 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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