A motorway is to be built near your house. As you think that is will destroy areas of natural beauty. Write a letter to the local authorities. In your letter
• Express your views
• Explain what damage will be caused
• Suggest alternative routes
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my annoyance regarding the highway coming up near my locality. I am hereby residing in 60,forest road,Calgary from the last five years and this area has been declared as best place to leave in terms of natural environment and clear air.
Let me explain the situation in more detail. Today, when I read the local newspaper about this project advertised by your organisation I fell very devasted. many people have a dream to live in this sector being close to nature and less noise as compared to other places.
In addition to this, it not only will destroy the peace but will also create many health problems to the people. As a result, more individuals will be affected by multiple diseases such as asthma and heart problems. Moreover, students living nearby area will get disturbed due to heavy noise created by vehicles.
As every lock has a key similarly according to me I have proposed route that would not only help us but also would give better results to the government as well.In my opinion, motorway could be built countryside behind the lake. Kindly, discuss this plan with your higher authorities.
I am looking forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Micheal.
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...r authorities. I am looking forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Miche...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, well, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89573459716 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55097840975 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696682464455 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1422403124 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0833333333 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 4.34317383033 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262899273761 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821201864743 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369018996122 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103542031678 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402595103451 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.