Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Requesting private details like hobbies and marital status has become quite common these days for the employers to ask from an employee during the hiring process. While it seems to be relevant and useful for the companies to ask this information as per some people, others disagree. I support the latter view because mostly employer uses this data to determine person's productivity and eligibility for the job offered, as it sometimes impacted by their private commitment and responsibilities, which is not an ethical way to hire an employee.
To begin with, people who support that asking personal information may be beneficial to the hiring organisation argue that employer often uses this information to understand their employee's requirement and plan several events personalized to them. For instance, birthday cakes are often arranged by companies to surprise their workers and make them feel special.
On the other hand, it is believed that the sole purpose of collecting this data during the interview is that they make an estimation of person's working skills, style and productivity at the workplace by analyzing different angles such as, if a person is married, it will tough for him to work till late due to his personal life and dependencies, while when a person is single, it is expected from him or her to work not only beyond their shift hours but also on weekends.
In conclusion, despite the facts that employers misuse this information to organise some special surprises for their employees to invigorate them, making it a way to hire a candidate is not appropriate and ethical. In my opinion, this approach may adversely impact the career of numerous deserving candidates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87561578476 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61231884058 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.653826801 49.4020404114 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.25 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373486344283 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159184572567 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852595035008 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212312487237 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759415688959 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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