Environmental problems ore loo big for individual countries and individual persons for address. ln other words, we have reached a stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Ever-increasing environment related problems are the gravest international concerns, nowadays. Some experts believe that initiatives at countries or personal level are not effective anymore, and international community need to intervene for safeguarding environment. However, I personally disagree as groundwork for this problem still requires efforts at state and personal level.
State, to begin with, need to start new initiatives for prohibitive actions against deteriorating environment. Aggressive infrastructure development can lead to environmental destruction in developing countries and It is state’s duty to maintain proper pollution checks in such cases. Additionally, government should also come up with the policies and initiatives that focus on raising awareness about importance of well-being of the natural habitat. ‘Swach Bharat Abhiyan’ is one such example, this policy was introduced by Government of India in the year 2018 to improve cleanliness in the country.
Citizens perhaps have the second most crucial role to play after country in preserving surroundings. People have the access to their home where governments can not intervene and it becomes the responsibility of the family to keep hygiene at their homes, and also assure that the garbage accumulated at home is not degrading local environment. They should have setup for recycling setup in the house which will help reducing overall waste generation per house. Finally, as a responsible citizen we ought to maintain cleanliness at public sites such as community parks, in the neighborhood.
It might be true that pressure exerted from international stages such as the U.N. might help speeding up the prohibitive actions at nation level, however ground work still needs to be done by local authorities or the public.
Overall, it appears that organizations operating internationally may perhaps be able to build a certain amount of pressure on nations with degraded environmental conditions however most of the patch work for fixing this problem will still be done by countrymen or the country itself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 356, Rule ID: CAN_SETUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have set up'?
Suggestion: have set up
...egrading local environment. They should have setup for recycling setup in the house which ...
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Line 7, column 416, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to reduce' or 'reduce'.
Suggestion: to reduce; reduce
...ling setup in the house which will help reducing overall waste generation per house. Fin...
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Line 11, column 155, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: groundwork
...bitive actions at nation level, however ground work still needs to be done by local authori...
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Line 15, column 66, Rule ID: MIGHT_PERHAPS[1]
Message: Use simply 'may', 'perhaps'.
Suggestion: may; perhaps
...organizations operating internationally may perhaps be able to build a certain amount of pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, may, second, so, still, well, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74840764331 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27274664824 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611464968153 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7597448819 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.846153846 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206010269903 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749672357341 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583665213607 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115988546712 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795938087175 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.