Even though globalization affects the world's economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss
In this globalized world, hand in hand and organizational efforts are quite advantageous to upgrade the global economy. In my perspective this steady increase could have both negative and positive areas of impacts that cannot be ignored at any cost.
To begin with, there is a plethora of benefits for personal and worldwide growth initiating with fulfillment of basic needs to the achievement of career goals in various terms. Getting involved in work and seeking opportunities like promotion , incentives for economical development best elaborates the facts. Moving further, some underdeveloped countries such as India, China are tracing a better pathway of development in collaboration with rich nations like US and England. it can be easily determined that the recession period is beneficial for every individual country to prove their roots in a positive way.
On downsides, some associated flaws affects the economic advancements. Firstly, computer assisted work has increased threat to the system functioning that can bankrupt the most valuable resources of the organization. Secondly, installation of high technology equipment has replaced the need of human resources as a consequences of which most of the people belongs to productive age groups are unemployed.Finally, globalization could result in more threatening issue in couple of years.
In conclusion, due to lot many pros of globalised trends in technology, associated cons are somewhat hidden but it seems to me that all related issues need to be addressed in proper way so that everyone enjoy their livelihood in such a great environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50806451613 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2595353306 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685483870968 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5239949934 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.6 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118254946342 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419240024741 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418125207484 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663339429764 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043159222392 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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