Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the years, technology has solved problems in virtually almost all industries, ranging from the automobile industry, communication industry even the entertainment industry, to mention a few. Industrialization, however, has posed its enviromental challenges, the obvious being global warming. Would technology evolve to solve such enviromental problems?
Global warming means the deplection of the ozone layer, thereby, causing higher levels of heat. The resulting effect of this is that hot regions of the world become hotter and cold regions warmer. Although there isn't a full proof solution to the deplection of the ozone layer, recent advancements in technology have made it possible for enviromental monitoring orgaizations to measure the amout of heat an industrial plant produces to be able to either recommend a shutdown or impose a sanction on them.
Furthermore, technology has provided alternative and effective ways to store and transfer information. Wood from trees are used to make papers. More papers mean more trees are cut down, further leading to deforestation. Technology has provided solutions like emails to help to both transmit information and reduce the use of paper altogether. Even though a school of thought would argue that written documents provide a sense of physical security, it has been well established that hardware features like cloud computing effctively help to store information without losing its quality and for a longer period of time.
Over time, technology has created solutions to man's challenges. Challenges like global warming have been reduced by the invention of monitoring devices, alternatives to traditional deforestation for paper production has also been created. Although these solutions might not be 100% accurate at the moment, I strongly believe that technology would definetly solve the enviromental problems the world faces today.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...and cold regions warmer. Although there isnt a full proof solution to the deplection...
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Line 5, column 603, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...out losing its quality and for a longer period of time. Over time, technology has created s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67719298246 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09161237829 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.3040973648 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.571428571 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12209276723 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449662896958 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607202557003 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787664409698 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503581515925 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.