There is no country which could assure that there are no deprived people in their country. As such each country takes certain actions to help such people and to curb poverty. In this essay I will point a few causes for world poverty and the steps we can take to help the needy.
Firstly, unequal distribution of wealth between the people causes some people to be well off while others have to fend for themselves. This leads to imbalance in the society. For example, ancestral property received by children and grandchildren without any hard work helps them to live a luxurious life while some people find it hard to get a decent meal.
Secondly, the growing population leads to economical imbalance. There is a low demand for jobs and the supply of manpower is high. This results in cheaper labor and higher cost of living. For instance, rapid population growth in India has led to vast unemployment among people and has in turn increased the number of people below poverty line.
Finally, lack of education is considered as one of the reasons for poverty. When a person is illiterate or has not completed basic education, he is not able to find a job in the current competitive world. With no job in hand, he is forced to do menial labor which provides enough to just feed him and his family. The children end up on the streets and without any education.
The government needs to put in more effort to stop poverty. Free and compulsory education should be provided to all the citizens without any bias. This improves the quality of education in the country and provides equal opportunities for employment.
Subsequently, ration & subsidized products should be provided to people who are below poverty line to ensure that no one is deprived of food and clothing. A certain amount in the budget should be set aside to curb poverty.
Furthermore, Sex education should be taught in villages and schools in order to control the growing population. Lower the population; there will be more job opportunities and less poverty in the country.
In conclusion, Poverty in one of the major problems faced by every country and it is the responsibility of the government to take control of this issue at the earliest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85039370079 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70342178556 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527559055118 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7216171713 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3181818182 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205909902193 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515296362263 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041260760843 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889701171713 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040529112883 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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