Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Currently there is a contentious argument that whether free health services should be available in all the nations or not? It might be at the cost of exempting the latest medical treatments as these are too expensive. I totally agree that free medical services are necessary.
Firstly, providing free medical services would give a sense of security to the residents of the country. Since the people would no longer be required to save for a bad day. Therefore, whenever anyone would require any emergency medical treatment they would at least be able to get the basic first aid and diagnosis of the underlying ailment. For instance, a person residing in a rural area might be able to receive emergency treatment for a heart attack as the government has a free community health center in the area where no private clinic exists due to the remote location of the village.
On the contrary, some people believe that free treatments are useless in the absence of latest medical aids. However, I do not agree that this is true. Basic first aid for any ailment does not necessarily require some expensive machinery. An epinephrie injection along with basic first aid from an experienced doctor might as well save a life or at least save time for reaching an advance care facility. For instance, a study shows that three fourth of the rural population in India is reliant on the free health facilities provided by the government. Moreover, concentrating on latest medical treatments which are often expensive would require hospitals to charge more treatment costs to recover the cost of the costly machines. Therefore, this system would deprive the low socio-economic sections from getting the necessary treatment.
In conclusion, I reiterate that basic medical facilities are quintessential for the residents of any country. Free medical treatments not only provide a sense of security but it also provides a basic first aid for the patients in rural areas where no private facilities exist.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...e treatments are useless in the absence of latest medical aids. However, I do not agree t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, at least, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0762195122 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7675790823 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509146341463 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5454517271 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23545110217 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967651931302 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070522262139 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172261368147 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109337770785 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.