You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words
Currently there is a contentious argument over whether online shopping is better than buying things from the market. I totally agree that online shopping not only saves time and energy but it also increases the ease of the shopping process. In this essay I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages and then conclude that I i believe that benefits of online shopping outweigh the disadvantages.
Beyond any qualms there are myriad of logical reasons that prove that shopping through e-commerce platforms has more advantages. Gone is the time when a person needs to waste his time standing in a que to make up for his purchase at the billing counter. Rather a shopper can scan thousands of new apparels on the click of a button within a fraction of seconds. For instance, a buyer can just type the name of the desired thing on the search button of Amazon and the thing can be delivered within next three days. Also, it saves the cost of transportation and the hassle of going into the rush and crowd.
On the contrary others believe that online shopping is a waste of time and money as they sometimes do not receive that product as shown in the image provided online. Moreover, certain thigs are better decided after actual trying it on ourselves. For instance, apparels and eye glasses cannot be exactly imagined whether they will look good in actual on our face type or body type.
in conclusion, i think that both type of shopping have their own benefits and flaws but this generation is a fast pace world and thus online shopping wins the war. it is more convenient, quick, time saving and easy. Will it continue to remain so? Still remains a question.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
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Message: Use simply 'remain'.
Suggestion: remain
...t, quick, time saving and easy. Will it continue to remain so? Still remains a question.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, second, so, still, then, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.735395189 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51167724299 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580756013746 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3499217086 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12269202061 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381490313586 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043742437097 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750183952243 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450234861129 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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