Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Advertisement industry is ruling the world today as they are everywhere be it newspapers, mobile phones, televisions, taxis and even on street hoardings. While many people view this ad industry as unnecessary that encourages the people to buy unwanted items but I believe that marketing helps to increase awareness about new innovations in technology that is going to make our life easy and improve the quality of our lives.
Beyond any qualms there are myriad of logical ideas to prove that marketing is a useful tool for both consumers as well as businessmen. If the customer will not get to know about what new products that are available the in the market then they will not gain knowledge about the purpose of use. A salient example is the mechanical hand chopper. As soon as amazon started it's marketing by increasing the number of sponsored ads on their page people began to notice this new product in the market that was capable of changing their everyday life and that too in such low price. this chopper was a promise of a one time cheap investment which was capable to saving both time and money as it did not need even electricity. therefore, paid marketing introduced a creative idea among the buyers that was not only accepted but it also eliminated the daily hassle of chopping and thus proved beneficial in terms of financial gain and time constrains of the consumers.
Furthermore, the advertisements show publicise certain products that were otherwise considered as taboos. Some advertisements increases the awareness of the things which were otherwise useful and necessary but were not comfortably discussed in the society. For instance, sanitary napkins and condoms are such products which are so compulsory and useful in daily life of humans but these were not discussed among the conservative families in certain indian villages as these were considered as a shame for the society. However, advertising on television lifted this curtain and now even the girls in remote villages of india can benefit from such useful products. therefore, they might be published to increase their business but it is a win situation for both the buyers as well as sellers.
In conclusion, I believe that advertising industry might be publishing adds to increase their sales and for their own financial gains but in the process it has resulted in increasing the awareness and utility of these products to improve the everyday life of the people worldwide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0586797066 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78574357868 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506112469438 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8791554116 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.785714286 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2142857143 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151022972162 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520672906081 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036308120674 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960434908585 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227451171745 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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