Every one love shopping, some love buying authentic clothes where as others love buying cheap but good quality clothes in some random shops. What do you like more? Why?
Shopping is an interest of many people. Many people focus on buying cheap but good clothes. On the other hand, an increasing number of people prefer to purchase famous brands products which authentic clothes. According to my opinion, I am not very important to the issue of authentic clothing brand so I can buy cheap and good quality clothes in some random shops.
Authentic clothes are usually expensive. Prices of authentic clothes are often stable and not too difference between another shops. I am just a student, I can not earn a lot of money for my shopping hobby. Therefore, I often looking for cheap but good shops. I do not force myself to purchase fixed somewhere. Check prices in some shops to ensure that I am getting the best way on my purchase. For example, when I went on Mậu Thân street to buy clothes, I visited a few shops selling the same dress I want to buy, then I chose any shop selling prices which fit with my pocketbook.
Beside, branded products are limited because of their exclusive brand. It means that sometimes we can hardly to buy favourite products because limited quantities. In contrast, some random shops will have far wider availability than the real. Brands sometimes are not really convenience. I do not have enough time to go to the places where clothing brand, instead, I bought in places that is easy to find places to buy cheap but good quality.
To sum up, I do not deny the role of authentic clothes. Many famous brand products also demonstrates the progress of society. Your clothes can emphasize social status, as well as a certain level of professionalism. A few quality outfits can make you look polite and take pride in your appearance. However, every consumer should follow the reality of situation to choose the goods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... quality clothes in some random shops. Authentic clothes are usually expensive....
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Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to difference'?
Suggestion: to difference
...hentic clothes are often stable and not too difference between another shops. I am just a stud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in contrast, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77993527508 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60335822591 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556634304207 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2446249768 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3333333333 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2380952381 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306774917568 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080552740892 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656682639697 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180561009222 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667645813478 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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