Some people claim that Facebook can help people strengthen their relationship. However, it is witnessed by many people that spending time on Facebook is the most popular activity even though they are with their friends.
Facebook is the most popular social networking website on the internet. Some people claim that Facebook can help people strengthen their relationship. But it is also true that many people that spending time on Facebook is the most popular activity even though they are with their friends.
The first, Facebook helps looking for people long time no see. Many old classmate did not have information of their friend since they graduated but thanks to Facebook, they detect their friends. It's fun to see their photos from every where. One such advantage of using Facebook is that it is a fast and easy way to communicate with family where ever they are in the world.. I have made some valuable connections of Facebook and I feel it really benefits. Second, It also helps keep long distance relationships alive. Relationships can blossom on Facebook. For long distance couples, the easy communication can help keep the love alive all the time they're apart.
In the other hand, a countless number of people speacial teenagers spend thousands of hours on Facebook. These people just seem like they have too much time on their hands and they spend it the wrong way: slaving in front of a computer screen watching every little detail someone does. However they don’t follow their members in their family, they spend more time to care your friend such as what their friend eat, or what do they do, or where do they go… They are attracted to the conversation with friend. They usually chat instead of doing homeworks, do houseworks or playing sports…. Facebook sometimes became a habit and I can not log out. When I work, I sometimes stop everything to go see the profile of someone. I know that a bad habit and it waste too much times.
To sum up, I think Facebook has brought us many more benefits than disavandtages. You could limit the time you spend on Facebook with friends by more ways. Let make sure you are benefiting from your social media relationships instead of being dragged down.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to look' or 'look'.
Suggestion: to look; look
... friends. The first, Facebook helps looking for people long time no see. Many old ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...first, Facebook helps looking for people long time no see. Many old classmate did...
^^
Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...iends. Its fun to see their photos from every where. One such advantage of using Facebook ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... family where ever they are in the world.. I have made some valuable connections o...
^^
Line 3, column 651, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...n help keep the love alive all the time theyre apart. In the other hand, a countle...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ching every little detail someone does. However they don’t follow their members in thei...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 752, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wastes'?
Suggestion: wastes
...someone. I know that a bad habit and it waste too much times. To sum up, I think ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 762, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... know that a bad habit and it waste too much times. To sum up, I think Facebook ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, look, really, second, so, then, i feel, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81686046512 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51377861997 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549418604651 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9490010836 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9047619048 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.380952381 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47619047619 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.584951069688 0.244688304435 239% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164929439898 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166733165508 0.0667982634062 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.388015220847 0.151304729494 256% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.238188534632 0.056905535591 419% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to look' or 'look'.
Suggestion: to look; look
... friends. The first, Facebook helps looking for people long time no see. Many old ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...first, Facebook helps looking for people long time no see. Many old classmate did...
^^
Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...iends. Its fun to see their photos from every where. One such advantage of using Facebook ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... family where ever they are in the world.. I have made some valuable connections o...
^^
Line 3, column 651, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...n help keep the love alive all the time theyre apart. In the other hand, a countle...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ching every little detail someone does. However they don’t follow their members in thei...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 752, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wastes'?
Suggestion: wastes
...someone. I know that a bad habit and it waste too much times. To sum up, I think ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 762, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... know that a bad habit and it waste too much times. To sum up, I think Facebook ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, look, really, second, so, then, i feel, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81686046512 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51377861997 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549418604651 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9490010836 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9047619048 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.380952381 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47619047619 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.584951069688 0.244688304435 239% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164929439898 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166733165508 0.0667982634062 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.388015220847 0.151304729494 256% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.238188534632 0.056905535591 419% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.