Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?

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Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly human evolution has been linked to meat in many fundamental ways. Although, many people believe that, with agricultural revolution people can have healthier life-style and to cut-down on meat consumption. However, I disagree with aforementioned notion and the reasoning is discussed in this essay.

First and foremost, our ancestors could not have had healthier life without animal flesh as a pure source of nutrient, carbohydrates and protein. Doctors and nutritionists opine that the scarcity of meaty diet can result in vitamin B12 deficiency which could lead to nerve damage and prevailing disease known as “anemia”. For example, there is a rapid incline of anemia in many European countries, where people are terminating the use of animal products and supporting veganism. Additionally, the lack of fish and poultry edibles can result in lack of red hemoglobin in blood. Moreover, lesser red cells in blood increase the size of heart which may cause heart attack and the consumption of meaty products can ameliorate health problems.

Furthermore, our canine teeth are the proof that nature has made us to be carnivore rather than only herbivore. If people stop eating animals than there would be increased numbers of farm animals, which could endanger our natural habitat. For instance, a recent survey in “The Environment Magazine” showed that India has more number of cows than cars in United States and this encroachment of cows are causing inevitable ecological consequences. This illustrates the importance of balance in vegetable and meat diet.

In conclusion, I strongly disagree that everyone should become vegetarian which not only have medical problems but also detrimental for our natural ecological system as well.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... our natural ecological system as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52573529412 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05333704435 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643382352941 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3749116352 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.615384615 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107359747101 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038358458271 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500926806662 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804279643703 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626601302933 0.056905535591 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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