Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
To many people having a vegetarian diet is the way to get healthier. Although I agree that eating vegetables and fruits can make human body fresher and thus stronger, I also passionately believe that not everyone should stop meat in order to have a good health.
In general, There are many benificial reasons to become a vegetarian. First of all, the sciences has demonstrated that flant foods contain almost fiber and absolutely not fat. It leads to the fact that a vegetarian can reduce the risk of illinesses such as heart disease, diabetes and obiesity. Moreover, due to the variety of plant foods, they can provided us with full kinds of vitamins and calcium as well, so we can ensure adequate nutrition to support our body without eating meat.
On the other hand, unlike meat that consists of a huge amount of calories, vegetable and fruit just help us partly to meet the daily calory demand. As the result, for many people who consume a huge amount of calories everyday, only eating vegetable can not meet their daily energy need of calories. Moreover, as the diffence in cooking styles in many countries, the efficency of eating plant foods is distinguish. For example, in vietnam culinary habits, vegetable is simply boiled in water is not good as being fried or stir-fried in western culinary.
In short, in lieu of eating meat, people also shoud take into account of plant foods as a vital souces of enery everyday.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in general, in short, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82113821138 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53191669587 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621951219512 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4302396855 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.818181818 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175680774995 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638811357854 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524448094819 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108304773776 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686598600854 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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