Everyone should become vegeterian because they do not need to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
The idea that people should eat only vegetable because meat is useless for our health remains in a source of controversy. In my option, you should eat more vegetable as you can however a heathy diet still can has meat.
On the one hand, vegetable is good for our health. Firstly, it have some nutrients which necessary for human existence like vitamin, protein,... Secondly, eating vegetable everyday not only help you avoid the dangerous diseases like heart diseases, fat,... but also help you lose weight. Thirdly, a vegetarian usually have a healthy mind. Additional, the more vegetable in your diet, the less animal that be killed for food. As well as endangered species will be protected.
However, on the other hand, a healthy diet also need meat. Because meat have a lot of important nutrients which only meat have like animal protein, animal fat,... It also give a lot of energy. If you only eat vegetable for a long time, you could tired, skinny and slack. Finally, some body can't eat vegetable so it is difficult for them to be a vegetarian.
In conclusion, you can choose to be a vegetarian but to have a good heath I think that you should plan for yourself a suitable diet which balanced with meat and vegetable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, well, i think, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7523364486 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55229178961 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551401869159 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8254742747 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2666666667 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168354038963 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621233092046 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515397237301 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122885727734 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206375152865 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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