Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a controversial issue about the duration of education in schools. Some teachers state that pupils should study, unless they turn eighteen years old, while some parents argue that children should end their study at any age. In this essay, I will consider both points of view and agree with the idea of age variability in graduation.
Let us start with reasons why some teachers claim that children should graduate from school at the age of eighteen. The first reason is that this time is enough for them to study necessary subjects. Children generally spend much time studying at school, so they need many years, for example, until they are at the age of eighteen, ti absorb the whole course. Another reason is that this fixed study period allows children lead social life at school. Apart from academic skills, children should have much time to develop social skills by communicating with both peers and tutors as part extra-curriculum activity. Therefore, children should study at school until they turn eighteen, because this time is more than sufficient for them to study all disciplines as well as soft skills.
However, some parents believe that authorities should allow children to choose when to finish study at school. They justify their opinion with the following arguments. Firstly, many talented students are capable to progress through the school curriculum earlier. Gifted children usually study faster than ordinary students, so they can complete the entire course earlier and go to universality. Secondly, some lagging students need more time to assimilate the school subjects entirely. Many students need more time than the traditional academic years, because they have either memory or concentration impairments. As a result, it is reasonable to introduce flexibility in school graduation, since it would help many children to finish school either before or after the majority.
In conclusion, even though some teachers advocate that children should study till they are eighteen years old, I think that education should be personalized and permit to complete education at any age for the above mentioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'completing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'permit' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: completing
...ation should be personalized and permit to complete education at any age for the above ment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31671554252 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62865237281 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539589442815 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2461370957 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.647058824 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167173524603 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603970618301 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507616037816 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116569266487 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282829972355 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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