Films and computer games which contain violence are very popular. Some people believe they have a negative effect on society and so should be banned. Other people, however, say they are just harmless and help people to relax. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion.
The presence of violence and crime in art forms has been a controversial topic since the ancient days. Nowadays, ostensibly, many a man subscribes to the idea that the over exposure of such violent content imparts some serious ill-effects in the society, while the others argue that it is inoffensive and a source of refreshment. This essay will delve into both the aspects of this argument and try to reach a rational conclusion after analyzing manifold facts.
One the one hand, the tendency of imitating movie scenes are very popular among the children, as they are not aware of the reality because of their immaturity, which in turn leads to danger. To elaborate, juvenile delinquency cases are sharply rising all over world in these days are likely an unfavorable outcome of such scenario. For instance, Blue whale, an online game, reportedly increases suicidal tendency among the youngsters, which is recently banned globally as a precaution. In addition, this movie or game culture would diminish the ethical values and sense of compassion in the teenagers, which may adversely affect the nurturing of a healthy future generation. Therefore, these factors appears to be a valid reason for censoring such scenes or games.
One the other hand, these movies or applications possesses certain entertainment values, as it equips the audiences with a thrilling experience. This could satisfy or entertain those who are more adventurous with evoking an adrenaline rush inside them. Super hero movies, for instance, are very popular among the masses due to these features. Therefore people should realize this as a fictional form of art
In short, even though the violent movies and applications enjoys the viewers or users with an art and sense of relaxation, this may disrupt the social values and psychological health of younger individuals. There, in my opinion, such scenes or games should be released with proper censoring and age restriction features.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23174603175 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81469347712 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615873015873 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5314982209 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.769230769 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139830967012 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044293885605 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245683842007 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748871491597 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025854072288 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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