The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The quick development of innovation joined with the more popularity of individuals in vehicle proprietorship has lead to an emotional expanded in the quantity of vehicles on British street these days. Because of the present circumstance, numerous people contend that there ought to be elective transportation and laws likewise need to control vehicle possession. As I would see it, I will in general concur with this assertion.
From the point of view of numerous people, vehicle possession may carry numerous advantages to their every day lives. To start with, having their own vehicle may take them feel more great and advantageous. For instance, individuals could utilize their own vehicle to commute home or to their organization in any time, rather than hanging tight for a transport or a train. Furthermore, having a vehicle is likewise a typical route for individuals to flaunt their riches and lift their standing. Numerous individuals go through a great deal of cash purchasing costly vehicles which have a place with well known brands, for example, BMW or Mercedes just to fulfill their interest.
Be that as it may, then again, vehicle proprietorship may accomplish more mischief than anything. The most genuine result is that more vehicles in the city, the higher measure of CO2 emanations in the climate. Subsequently, this will prompt air contamination just as an Earth-wide temperature boost. Besides, possessed vehicle is additionally a key factor impacting the gridlock in enormous urban communities. The tremendous number of vehicles out and about diminish the spaces for different vehicles and at last reason genuine blockage, particularly in times of heavy traffic.
Taking everything into account, I contend that it is important to control the quick increment of vehicle possession in this cutting edge society due to its drawbacks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, likewise, may, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in general, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36177474403 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00347502263 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607508532423 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.087149959 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.214285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119867542679 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449209741899 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405872240892 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766683873383 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352521186507 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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