a friend of yours has received some money and plant to use all of it either *to go on a vacation. *to buy a car. your friend asked you for advice . compare your friend's two choices and explain which one you think your friend should choose . use spec

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
When someone request for advice from ...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'requests'.
Suggestion: requests
When someone request for advice from me . It is very difficu...
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Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... When someone request for advice from me . It is very difficult state , because ma...
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Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ice from me . It is very difficult state , because maybe my opinion is not good fo...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...use maybe my opinion is not good for him . If I was in his shoes , I would buy a c...
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...not good for him . If I was in his shoes , I would buy a car . I will look for thr...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...f I was in his shoes , I would buy a car . I will look for three things important ...
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Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... I will look for three things important an useful , pleasure and waste money . ...
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Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...ook for three things important an useful , pleasure and waste money . E...
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Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...ant an useful , pleasure and waste money . Everyone should be find thin...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...seful , pleasure and waste money . Everyone should be find things can usefu...
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Line 11, column 56, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...should be find things can useful from it . A car you can use it as a work like tax...
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Line 11, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...ou can use it as a work like taxi driver . While a vacation is not important very ...
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Line 11, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...can use it as a work like taxi driver . While a vacation is not important very much ....
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Line 11, column 152, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...le a vacation is not important very much . It is only for entertainment . ...
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Line 11, column 183, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...very much . It is only for entertainment . Pleasure is very important ....
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... . It is only for entertainment . Pleasure is very important . By vacation...
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Line 15, column 32, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... . Pleasure is very important . By vacation you can interesting more , ...
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Line 15, column 55, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
...is very important . By vacation you can interesting more , but you can interesting by car a...
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Line 15, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t . By vacation you can interesting more , but you can interesting by car also. Fu...
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Line 15, column 86, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
... you can interesting more , but you can interesting by car also. Funny in a vacation is lim...
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Line 15, column 105, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...g more , but you can interesting by car also. Funny in a vacation is limited only fo...
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Line 15, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... a vacation is limited only for few days , however a car forever. You can go anywh...
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Line 15, column 221, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...er. You can go anywhere by your car easy , but in vacation you will be communicate...
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Line 15, column 288, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... be communicate by poplar transportation . Waste money is bad habit...
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Line 15, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... communicate by poplar transportation . Waste money is bad habit . If you...
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Line 19, column 32, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... Waste money is bad habit . If you go to a vacation , you will depe...
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Line 19, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y is bad habit . If you go to a vacation , you will depend a lot of money . As you...
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Line 19, column 91, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...acation , you will depend a lot of money . As you are buying a car , you saved you...
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Line 19, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...a lot of money . As you are buying a car , you saved your money . In future , If y...
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Line 19, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... are buying a car , you saved your money . In future , If you need a money , you w...
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Line 19, column 143, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...e buying a car , you saved your money . In future , If you need a money , you will able t...
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Line 19, column 152, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...a car , you saved your money . In future , If you need a money , you will able to ...
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Line 19, column 174, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
... money . In future , If you need a money , you will able to sell it . Th...
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Line 19, column 201, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... need a money , you will able to sell it . This is my chose for you . Mi...
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Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...oney , you will able to sell it . This is my chose for you . Might is not ...
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Line 23, column 29, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... it . This is my chose for you . Might is not good for you , but it is m...
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Line 23, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hose for you . Might is not good for you , but it is my advice . You can decide an...
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Line 23, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s not good for you , but it is my advice . You can decide and chose the best one ....
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Line 23, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... . You can decide and chose the best one . Although I still believe buy a car the ...
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Line 23, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill believe buy a car the best for you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25853658537 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36957294501 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492682926829 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.8683164863 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 43.65 106.682146367 41% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.25 20.7667163134 49% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.55 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.01903807615 817% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26683137106 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929400754023 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756441025929 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159139308718 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490574597693 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.8 13.0946893788 29% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 11.3001002004 42% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.95 12.4159519038 48% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.67 8.58950901804 66% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 78.4519038076 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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