It is sometimes said that borrowing money from friends can harm or damage the relationship . Do you agree ? why or why not .

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It is sometimes said that borrowing money from friends can harm or damage the relationship . Do you agree ? why or why not .

Recently relationship between friends has confronted a lot of problems . There are those who say borrowing money from friends harm the relationship , while others believe the opposite . In this essay I will examine both sides and add my overall view .

People who say that borrowing money causes negative results have their own perspectives and reasons . They think borrowing money as exploitation for friendship . As well as the main reason that they think that most friends need friendship for personal purposes . For example , if someone asked his friend borrowing money and he doesn't know if he has money or no , so In this case maybe happen embarrassing attitude that can make the relationship weaker than before .

Despite of all these arguments this is matter depends on the friends themselves , if they have a good thinking toward their friends . In addition a lot relationship stand at the cooperation between friends and they deal with each other easily without any problems . For instance , some people believe broadly that asking friends for any favor help the relationship to be stronger and better . consequently they regard each other brothers .

In conclusion , from my overall opinion I disagree with this matter from numerous reason beside it depend on the personality of friends . I think people who say that borrowing money harmful have negative view with all due respect . On my opinion I think borrowing money is a matter of giving and taking .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16949152542 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7469798757 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563559322034 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9131710653 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1428571429 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223432160485 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866326883191 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619721957563 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152810271095 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413645881836 0.056905535591 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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