In this modern age, the gap between affluent and the destitute are rapidly increasing while widening the differences between both parties. In spite of these occurrences, some believe that there are certain measures to be taken into consideration in order to reduce the differences among these people. In my personal opinion, I think both individuals and governments should work together to eliminate this conflict to improve the living standards of financially disabled people.
Firstly, this situation is commonly affected in developing countries, whereas it has been the cause of many social and economic problems. Extreme poverty and crimes are correlated since people are trying to commit offences in order to earn a living. Furthermore, the children are often gambled in these situations, since even when they are able with skill and talent for studies, they are unable to get education because of their living conditions. As a result, they are unemployed and they intend to engage in certain delinquency. For an instance, majority of the victims of demises around the world in using firearms are from the youth sector. With the decrease of the work force in a country the economy will be unstable and it will present an uncertainty in development. Moreover, poverty leads into obligations in public health, where people do not have access to medical services.
However, governments should take necessary steps to tackle these issues and mitigate the gap between rich and poor. Some officials suggest that, giving financial aid to certain families with financial difficulties will eliminate poverty but instead, I believe that they should act beyond; think out of the box, unlike ensuring quality education and giving access to medical services to all citizens. This will definitely increase the living standards and minimize poverty. Also, developed countries have a pivotal role in taking responsibility to eradicate poverty from the face of the earth. It is a positive factor that these measures are already in motion in some African and Asian countries where welfare programs and medical camps are been established by international organizations such as WHO and UN etc.
In summary, as human beings, each and every person is entitled and has the right to have a quality life. I believe, education is the ammunition of anyone’s armory to fight against poverty. With that being said, governments along with the help of individuals and international organizations should ensure to deliver quality education to children, as well as adults in every community. This will exterminate the gap between the richer and poorer in years to come
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uce the differences among these people. In my personal opinion, I think both indiv...
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...e differences among these people. In my personal opinion, I think both individuals and governmen...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'whereas', 'while', 'i think', 'in summary', 'such as', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.257510729614 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.156652360515 0.155533422707 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0708154506438 0.0946595960268 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0364806866953 0.0501214627716 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0278969957082 0.0437548338989 64% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137339055794 0.122226691241 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0386266094421 0.0403226058552 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83701549405 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0407725321888 0.0326793684256 125% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.109442060086 0.0861772015684 127% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.019313304721 0.021408717616 90% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00643776824034 0.011925033212 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2653.0 1933.35771543 137% => OK
No of words: 421.0 316.048096192 133% => OK
Chars per words: 6.30166270784 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20517956788 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.420427553444 0.374742101984 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.330166270784 0.28420135186 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.223277909739 0.203846283523 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137767220903 0.137316102897 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83701549405 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.037074148 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548693586698 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 63.8075112591 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1578947368 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2892592588 49.517814964 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.631578947 127.492653851 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1578947368 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.947368421053 0.814263465372 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 55.1745218152 49.1944974215 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.96116504854 1.69124875643 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.483655890442 0.332605444948 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.092510131973 0.102741220458 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0646207593525 0.0668466124924 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.512437787236 0.534860350844 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.107295887202 0.148594505496 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.2077290622 0.134430193775 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10267344241 0.0742795772207 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.474381300773 0.324371583561 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00655813098789 0.0638462369009 10% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.36554098923 0.228012699653 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191070668101 0.058150111329 33% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.5751503006 311% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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