Global warming is one of the major issues faced by people of 21st century. What are the reasons behind global warming and how it is impacting life?
The humans of this era encountering many crises out of which the rising temperature of earth is most devastating. The major cause of this issue is changing lifestyle of people which is having negative effects on surroundings.
With the evolution of human beings, the living habits of people changed in such a dramatic way that the degree of hotness of earth also raised to great extent. As increasing population of members of human race put pressure on natural resources leading to deforestation and over exploitation of fossil fuels causing higher emissions of greenhouse gases. These gases got trapped in earth’s atmosphere resulting in inclining level of temperature. To evident my point of view, a report published by UN states that 25% forest cover disappear in last century due to which remaining forests were unable to absorb the carbon discharged by vehicles elevating the temperature by 1 degree Fahrenheit.
The most preponderant effect of hotter globe is destruction of living space. The huge glaciers are melting down due to increased temperature of earth which raise the level of sea ultimately flooding the coastal areas, forcing the people to shift on another places. Moreover, the depletion of the ozone layer permits the harmful rays to enter the earth’s atmosphere making habitat harsh and more prone to illness. According to Naval Forces of United States, 1% of land submerged under water because of the breakdown of one-fifth the ice sheets of world.
In favor of arguments outlined above one can conclude that modified routines of human lead to more production of carbon dioxide causing global warming which is crafting an unfit environment for living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23247232472 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78910652506 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653136531365 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.243533787 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.909090909 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0947182831437 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304221991796 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427052906178 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617336369381 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415988391047 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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