A government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety. Therefore, some people think that the government should increase spending on defence but spend less on social benefits. To what extent do you agree?
It is the duty of the law enforcement agency to ensure the safety of its individuals. It has argued by a significant number of individuals that the state should utilize more funds on the protection system of the nation from enemies and less on social benefits such as cinema halls. Although, the defence is necessary for any nation to have strong boundaries against enemy countries. I am of the opinion that community benefits are also vital to have a healthy environment in the nation.
Entertainment is vital in today’s lifestyle for people to release work stress and family tensions. Fun and social activities with friends or family allow a person to relax and boost the momentum of an individual to feel alive and happy while struggling with hurdles in life. Therefore, the Indian government promotes the Bollywood industry around the world to encourage and let Indians and others to enjoy the taste of Indian cinema even in foreign lands. It has proven from studies that cinema impacts on the mind of persons psychologically and help them to feel happy and alive while watching theatre.
On the other side, the defence system is required to control the public from inside the nation as well as to act against enemy countries whenever required. The arms and power of police enforce the public to follow discipline, law and order to maintain peace. For instance, the protection of country people from enemy countries in a war like situations is supported by using advanced equipment and tools of ammunition. Consequently, it is vital for the nation to have updated weapons.
In conclusion, while the defence system is essential in terms of the safety of individuals from inside and outside the country. The social activities like entertainment are also equally vital to have a healthier environment in society. Hence I believe that we should circulate funds according to the needs of the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ave a healthier environment in society. Hence I believe that we should circulate fund...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04100946372 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78968177997 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520504731861 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4889017193 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.533333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0866494300622 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273782257899 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02281566778 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516571132504 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019171589036 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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