Although the government is spending the huge amount in public sectors, it is quite essential to spend money on arts as well. Some people might discord with this claim, however, I absolutely concur with this perspective and will provide the justifications and evidence in this essay to validate my bird's eye view.
To embark upon, spending money on public sectors such as education, hospital, transportation should always be preferable because excellent public services is a sign of healthy and wealthy nation which is a sign of prestige. Owing to lack of good public facilities nation will become weak and standing as deaf and dumb in front of other nations. To elaborate, to make the tree strong, it is essential to pour the sufficient quantity of water in the root, similarly, excellent services are acting as water for our nation.
On the other hand, art is having a direct relationship with our mind and heart and acting as a stress reliever.For instance, some people listening to the music or playing a musical instrument to relieve their stress. Furthermore, annually huge amount of funding has been generating with various music concerts and movies, which is really helping the nation to make the more funding in public sectors, so it should be taken care well.
In my opinion, both arts and public services are essential, so must be taken care well to bring the happiness to our nation.
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- Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.To what extent do yo u agree with this statement? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, really, similarly, so, well, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96595744681 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69800657428 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565957446809 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.841964581 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.875 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.375 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185652390189 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750103960122 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445098812602 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108755536594 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566976894956 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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