08/11/2017You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.Say where you think you left the papers.Explain why they are so importantTel

To
The Manager
Ibis Hotel Lim
Muscat Oman
Sub--Request for Documents

Sir,
With Respect I used your hotel room no 201 on 25th to 28th December in 2017 for our meting purpose in your city in Muscat Oman. After finished the meeting I returned my country Bangladesh .But when I reached at my home I realized that I by mistake I left some documents in your hotel. I believe I kept all documents in my room on the table. Those papers ar very important because the meeting where I attend all documents specially our business plan drawing and other designs papers are also there. All documents are in a big envelop. I told about the importance of those documents to you. I visited so many times to your hotel. So its a request to you please kindly send the documents to my address in Bangladesh. I need thsis documents as soon as possible. Please kindly send all documents by DHL to me and also let me know the cost of this delivery.In this letter I am giving you my home address. After send the documents please kindly send me the parcel number of this documents. Please kindly note that the charge of this delivery must go from your your hotels account so that I can pay the cost easily by website.My house address is
D-2 Agrani Al Monowar Apartment
129 Bara Magbazar
Dhaka Bangladesh 1264
Phone -00889359182

I hope in this address you must send the documents. In case if you have any confusion please do not feel any hesitation call me any time to my this number. I will appreciate your quick response .
Thanking you
Tanweir

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 32.9175257732 164% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 277.0 206.0 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59205776173 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49546973209 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56678700361 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.8690068142 44.8134815571 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.13333333333 4.34317383033 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 2.54639175258 1571% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225339369387 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830905565195 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714092839727 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615085996539 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799312738108 0.0580467560999 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.