Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough learning practical skills.Do you agree or disagree?

In our modern life education is very important for everybody. In a single work we can say that education is the back bone of a nation.In this education system pupil are start to their life from schools to universities where they read book related education .But in this case practical work is not too much like theoretical .The debate of the today is compare the importance between theoretical and practical educational level.
Some people believe that theoretical education is more important .Because in the present job market maximum company in their office level they prefer theoretical level. Because in our education system this level has more importance than practical education. Even in salary level they get more benefit . In this level after theoretical study students do some work in their educational field.Regarding that purpose the importance of theoretical education is more than practical education.
But in other side some people also think that practical education is more important than educational. In every where all businesses specially industry types or service types of organization run by practical education .Owner of the industry or service center or this types of organizations are totally depends on them.Their salary their benefit everything depends on their work performance.
In my opinion view I strongly believe that both of the education systems are important and none of the systems are not wasting pupils time. There is a stage where theoretical are very important on the same side practical education also important. But if the education board try to give more time about the practical education for the pupil in schools or colleges or universities it will better for everybody.
in modern day education system is improving in day by day and theoretical and practical education importance is also increasing .So in the society and business organization if they give importance both of the work I think that day education system should be successful for everybody

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, i think, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2789968652 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92828341354 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448275862069 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.241323606 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.333333333 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117976219415 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590585153305 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385652649152 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072887058616 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373972866966 0.056905535591 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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