The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
As the technology and economy advanced, people's anticipation changed from fulfilling fundamental supplements and adequate commodities to going further with higher life quality. It's widely known that not only does physical acquirement matter, but mental need is joint. Therefore, government is obliged to invest into both art and public service in my perspective.
Besides that the nurturing influence on individual, art can exert positive influence on society subliminally and in depth, which can't be reached when it comes to simply public refinement. Surprisingly, it is these art work, which born during specific era, that was able to tear up unstoppable tide which nothing can defect. In the late middle age, renaissance sprouting in Italy, blossomed and revealed the darkness and tortures via paintings, poetry, sculpture, etc. Renaissance awakened people to the light of liberty and humanity. Nowadays, Art is politic to social extent. It trumpets the ideology in a more tender and impressive way, comparing to the old tools like news.
Contrary to the view deeming art as pure money consumption, art is super potential to creat money and be commercial. It's said that Web 3.0 comes and NFT is an undoubted hit. We can see the trend that art would be a vortex pump in this brand-new mode. While art have interrogated into contemporary lifestyles, it's time for public service to keep up with that.
Overall, art should not be neglected
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ociety subliminally and in depth, which cant be reached when it comes to simply publ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24137931034 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88848424964 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685344827586 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7400655944 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8571428571 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194681675327 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600662753183 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696286158383 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111246244668 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321201218326 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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