The government should pay to the parents of very young children, so that one of them can stay at home and look after their children.
What do you think are the pros and cons of this policy? Justify your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
children are the tender buds of the society and hence it becomes responsibility of the parents to take utmost care of the infants. many people believe that government should provide financial assistance to the parents so that they can spend more time with their young ones by taking a break their jobs. Although, it is considered to be good practice, however in my opinion its demerits outweighs the merits. In this essay, we will delve into both the aspects with a suitable opinion.
To embark on, there are several reasons why governments should not pay the parents of young children. Firstly, with the increasing population, it can certainly become an overhead on the economy. Moreover, the opportunists would misuse it and plan for more number of kids as the authorities are supporting financially. Secondly, there will be no possible way in which authorities can ensure whether the parents actually need any money or not and they might end up assisting the ones who actually do not even require it. For instance, one of my cousin, working abroad, was provided extended maternity leaves by her organisation while receiving some proportion of her salary every month. The company started this initiatives to help families manage the expenses and run their homes smoothly during this time. Furthermore, there are several insurance policies, which disburse frequent payout to the parents for certain time to take care of their newborns.
On the other hand, as many organization do not provide child care benefits, it becomes difficult for the parent to leave their job due to financial issues. it is the parents who give shape and value to their lads. Additionally, as young ones need extra care and security, it is advisable that any one of the parent should stay at home with them. Thus, government playing a role in compensating this is a major benefit.
To end with, instead of giving governments the responsibility to pay, parents should start looking for other alternatives as getting payment from government will create a burden on the economy and is not a workable solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08092485549 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7506981548 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580924855491 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9444101085 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.875 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253979830425 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798196390068 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069152420618 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159588147319 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315015805732 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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