Governments in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on foods and beverages with high levels of sugar. Some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Government introduce taxes sometime to generate their revenue but they also implement them occasionally because of their hidden purpose. In number of different countries the local government introduce special taxes on food and beverages with high level of sugar. Although, some people believe its good but others think that is not useful as it look like. In my opinion, I think it will help a little to manage the consumption of these goods but will not affect a lot.
To commence with, Firstly higher in tax level will lead into rise of cost of such drinks and products. The higher price will put extra burden on customers pocket which resulted in reduction of consumption of such item. The hidden purpose here government want to serve is by dropping down consumption will lead to healthier life in nations population, as these goods leads to diseases such as diabetes which is root cause of all the major health problem.
On the other hand, people are habitual, they can not easily change there habit what they are used to on regular basis. Adding dollar or two in price might not effect there buying behavior and they will continue to buy these products. These taxes will either make a slight or no effect to demand of these product. Hence some people says it not useful. In addition, during marriages and party people will still buy and drink it, these adding dollars will not stop them to serve these goods on that special occasion, however it will skyrocket the cost of organizing these events.
In conclusion, I believe these taxes will on change the quantity demand graph a little bit but not a lot. The one who like to buy it will still buy it but the one who occasionally buying it will stop buying them or will try to buy even on reduced frequency.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, so, still, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71935483871 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3642344593 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51935483871 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1251494985 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207271994192 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912934753587 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100751728555 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14595671088 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129453518631 0.056905535591 227% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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