The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum
to what extinct do you agree?
Obesity has been gaining a great deal of attention across the globe. Most importantly, the issue has been a bone of contention among healthcare specialists and economists regarding its impact on the existing healthcare system. Some people believe the key way to tackle this challenge is to initiate physical education in the school syllabus. I agree entirely with the school of thought, and it seems that including theoretical and practical knowledge on health, sport, and essential exercise in the school curriculum would be the best way to curb it.
To minimize the challenge of obesity and its ultimate effect country’s health facility, initiating a theoretical subject on health, sport, and essential exercise in the school syllabus would be an excellent long-term approach. This is simply because the student will be able to understand the deep insight of health, which allow them to lead a healthy life such as consuming a nutritious diet, waking up early in the morning, practicing fundamental exercise and the like, making popular lifestyle among youngsters. Therefore, having such a long-term initiative will curb this trend of obesity and reduces its detrimental effect on our existing treatment system.
Practicing sports and basic exercise on school premises, as a part of the physical education program, will be vital to eradicating the overweight challenge. This is mainly because of doing regular exercise, the student will be kept fit both mentally and physically. This will lead them to avoid a sedentary lifestyle directly linked to obesity and many severe life-threatening diseases such as diabetes, hypertension and so on, reducing pressure on existing healthcare systems. In China, for example, practicing primary exercise in school is mandatory for every student to keep fit. As a result, the number of obese people in China in 2020 was only 0.05%. Therefore, having such a program in school syllabi is the most effective way to prevent health burdens.
In conclusion, to combat the growing challenge of being overweight and its impact on the healthcare provider, the inclusion of physical education in school curriculum by the government as a long-term approach, would be the most effective way
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34472934473 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93029049438 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3316890325 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0714285714 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212139591223 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802728715416 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657236393386 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144420481463 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627577698586 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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