The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.Do you agree or disagree?
It's often argued that, with the advent rise in the purchases using the internet will lead to store's shutdown in the coming future. I completely disagree with this argument, many prefer love's to shop locally instead of buying online because neither they can see or feel the product.
It's true that shopping online provide's us the various option's to buy online conveniently without going anywhere from the place you are, but, in-terms of safety, it's not the best way. We can be easily tricked in many forms. For example, one of my friend wanted to buy a laptop online and browsed many websites to buy it for a discounted price than the local market offers. He landed into a site which has very nice user interface and the banner of the site says forty percent all over the products they sell. He felt something is fishy and purchased it offline in the companies outlet. He was very happy to try many models and chosen a product he desired.
But buying from dealers or local shops is not always possible because they may lack in selling the new arrivals or rare selling products. For example, a year back I thought of purchasing shoes from a famous brand. But, that model is barely available in the market because of its low production. I have contacted many dealers and stores throughout city i am residing and no where the footwear is available. Later I started to search online and luckily found them in companies official site. I have spoken with the customer care to confirm the authenticity and purchased them with a lesser price tag than my budget.
To conclude, Many believe that purchasing product from the local shops is always comfortable to try than buying online. Even though, the percentage of people buying online may increase due to the ease and availability, It will not lead to the closing of all the stores either in cities or towns.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: companies'; company's
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...models and chosen a product he desired. But buying from dealers or local shops i...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Suggestion: now
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73006134969 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40816301876 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567484662577 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4286836421 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9375 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165561881384 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470052487392 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497461883669 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114692751684 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428611674691 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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