The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.Do you agree or disagree?
It's often argued that, with the advent rising of the online purchases will lead's to the shutdown of the stores in the coming years. I completely disagree with this argument, many prefer to shop locally instead of buying online because they cannot feel or see the product in live.
It's true that shopping online provide's us the various option's to buy conveniently without going anywhere from the place you are, but, it lacks in-terms of safety and reliability.
A survey conducted by a British media conglomerate confirms online scams are increasing at an average rate of five percent every year. For example, one of my colleague ordered a laptop in a site offered for a far lesser than the market price. He waited for so long period, but the site never delivered his product. From there on, he never prefer's buying online and suggest others by explaining his bad experience.
There is a contradiction to the above statement, buying from dealers or local shops always, is not possible because they may lack in selling the new arrivals or products which are rarely bought. For example, last year I wished to buy vintage shoes from a famous brand. But, that model is barely available in the market because of scarcity. I have contacted many footwear dealers throughout the city but couldn't find them. Finally, I started searching online and luckily found the shoes on their official site.
To conclude, Many believe purchasing product's from the local shops is always comfortable than buying online. Even though, the percentage may increase due to the ease and availability, It will not lead to the closing of all the stores either in cities or towns.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94642857143 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53078998717 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635714285714 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9004485573 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186780506884 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554557893408 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452240788514 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108466207043 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478628370031 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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