The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?
Particularly in urban areas, stores and shops will be replaced by online shopping in the future. Websites and mobile applications are making it easier for the consumer to buy products online. In my opinion, online shopping has more benefits as compared to local stores, and it saves precious time of the customer as well.
With the advent of modern technology, there has been an exponential increase in online retailing, as a result, it has become more convenient for the customers to buy products online. People can shop from anywhere or anytime from the comfort of their house, whereas, that is not the case while shopping from a store. Additionally, the feature of home delivery helps many people save time commuting. Often, apps have free home delivery option and consumer's do not have to travel to a particular place to purchase an item.
I believe web stores also provide a wide variety to products. Local Shops, on the other hand, might not have such a vast array of choices for the customers. For example, Apps that sell cloths have various categories that can be browsed through all in one place,consequently, a person could search for his/her favourite colour or design conveniently. Furthermore, online shopping can help save money though coupons or credit point. Some websites send vouchers for first time purchase or have regular sales that are advertised regularly. It engages the customer with the webstore, apart from saving money, customer also feels appreciated. Therefore, popularity of online shopping is advantageous for the customer in several ways.
In Conclusion, since buying items also requires physically examining them, importance of local stores can not be undermined, however, with the changing times, online shopping will make local stores rudementary and eventually replaced them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , consequently
... can be browsed through all in one place,consequently, a person could search for his/her favo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, however, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36551724138 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80830262165 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2576860298 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.733333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171391970569 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609503817251 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701393861126 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117182067067 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452843319931 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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