Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this can not be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change.discuss both views and give your opinion.
Allowing unacceptable human activities are the biggest concern for all negative activity including hurting the living things such as plants and animals. Some people think that this cannot be stopped. However, others have a positive perception that this can be curtailed down if appropriate action can be taken. I will put both the arguments forward and place my opinion accordingly.
People think that Increasing population is one of the major factor in this fatal contribution. Industries for example sugar, steel, coal and other major industries are now installed in almost every part around the world to satisfy the human needs. These industries require large space to setup their businesses and to make it possible they have no options but deforestation. Cutting off the trees and expanding such industries is having the worst effect on the globe such as increasing CO2 emissions and greenhouse gases. This of course adversely affect on the habitats of the forest as well because they also need to migrate from one place to another. Some of them survive while others suffers from deprivation of hunger.
In addition to that, humans are the social animals. There luxuries have now become their need. In Western countries, millions of animals are slaughtered everyday to feed their citizens and thousands of plants are weeded out to make it as a part of the meal to keep the standard up. Such acts clearly show that in next few decades some animals and plants might be extincted from this world.
However, many social activist believe that these habits can be changed if appropriate actions can be taken. Humanity is what need to be developed in the people. They must realize the repercussions of their over utilization of animals and plant species. Also, the government should initiate the campaign of individual responsibility and inject the concept of 'saving the planet'.
I believe animals and plants are very important part of our lives. These creatures should be saved profusely not just because for the sake of humanity but also to save this world. I strongly believe that if such activities are not controlled then this world soon will see the complete extinction of forest habitats which means people would fight for the food and this may cause the reason of beginning of World War III.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: CAN_SETUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to set up'?
Suggestion: to set up
...s. These industries require large space to setup their businesses and to make it possibl...
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Line 3, column 548, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...enhouse gases. This of course adversely affect on the habitats of the forest as well beca...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...es, millions of animals are slaughtered everyday to feed their citizens and thousands of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, for example, in addition, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0656167979 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60066183333 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55905511811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4715125444 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9047619048 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19047619048 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361731976315 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974168795386 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871068069064 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204979371297 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097574642868 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.