In this contemporary era mostly individuals have sedentary life style therefore they are used to consume fast food. But i personally believe that this tendency has many drawbacks than merits. The facts of the thesis will be demonstrated in following paragraphs .
It is irrefutable that masses are living with hectic life style undoubtedly they do not have adequate time to prepare meals, but garb-and-go practice of food makes easier their life. instead of time saving benefits, fast food has brought negative consequences because consumption of such edible items is hazardous for their health. There is no denying that fast food is unhealthy when it comes to its nutritional values as it always consists imbalanced nutritions. consequently, several health issues are being created as not only immune but also the digestive systems has been affected of fast food consumers. hence, this trend has been negatively working.
Indeed, humans,nowadays, can enjoy plenty of varieties of food due to fast food items, but earlier they had handful dishes in terms of their traditional limited recipies. Although options of food have been increased, along with this, the expenses of food budget has been dramatically inclined. it cannot be denied that in this modern era, individuals have to pay a massive part of their income in restaurants which seems as considerable demerit. Definitely, people are not eligible to save money because the cost of their dinner or lunch is increased, even having the dinner in expensive hotel has become a fashion. thereby, this is also considered as major drawback.
To sum up, nevertheless fast food is fruitful in terms of time-conservator as well as it has introduced numerous variations, but it’s bad nutrients and high expenditure demerits dominant its positive aspects, which needs more attention.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to consuming'.
Suggestion: used to consuming
...sedentary life style therefore they are used to consume fast food. But i personally believe tha...
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Suggestion: Instead
...actice of food makes easier their life. instead of time saving benefits, fast food has ...
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Suggestion: Consequently
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Suggestion:
...ues are being created as not only immune but also the digestive systems has been ...
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Suggestion: Hence
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Suggestion: , nowadays
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Message: Did you mean 'its bad nutrients'?
Suggestion: its bad nutrients
...has introduced numerous variations, but it’s bad nutrients and high expenditure demerits dominant ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3275862069 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93976965154 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641379310345 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5922416099 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230264435741 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676623455688 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499863492488 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128529883059 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446087277951 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.