Immigration has a major impact on society What are the main reasons of immigration To what consequences can it lead To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statement

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Immigration has a major impact on society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?
To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statement?

It is often argued that immigration nowaday has a significant impact on modern society. One of the main reasons of immigration is that it can create multi-cultural societies. Although I agree there are benefits, I believe that immigration can also discriminate in certain cultures.

To begin with, most migrants have different backgrounds. It is a positive influence on society when they start to live in a foreign country because they bring new values and language. For example, when I was studying in Australia, I could always see a variety of restaurants and people talking in different languages on the street, because Australia is a multicultural society that is made up of a wide range of cultures. Therefore, immigration can create a society that has attraction and diversity.

On the other hand, people of many different nationalities live together in the same places which have different values and lifestyles. It is possible to cause intention and conflict because of misunderstanding from each other. For instance, the local stores might worry that migrants can not speak their language, and choose not to serve them. Furthermore, some people could be affected by costume or appearance regarding specific immigration as an enemy. As a result, despite immigration bring the diverse cultures into society, it also causes discrimination.

To sum up, this essay has argued that the major reason which causes an important impact on society. In my opinion, I agree with the statement that immigration not only create a multi-cultural society but also can lead to serious consequences.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ersity. On the other hand, people of many different nationalities live together in the same...
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Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch other. For instance, the local stores might worry that migrants can not speak ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29527559055 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15690345625 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57874015748 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9977600185 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0714285714 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221508846562 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816787027636 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721703161301 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15577264604 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831302200705 0.056905535591 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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