Immigration has a major impact on society What are the main reasons of immigration To what consequences can it lead To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statement

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Immigration has a major impact on society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?
To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statement?

It is often argued that immigration nowaday has a significant impact on modern society. One of the main reasons of immigration is that it can create multi-cultural societies. Although I agree there are benefits, I believe that immigration can also discriminate in certain cultures.

To begin with, most migrants have different backgrounds. It is a positive influence on society when they start to live in a foreign country because they bring new values and languages. For example, when I was studying in Australia, I could always see a variety of restaurants and people talking in different languages on the street, because Australia is a multicultural society that is made up of a wide range of cultures. Also, a multi-cultural city can attract more tourists to visit. Therefore, immigration can create a society that has attraction and diversity.

On the other hand, people of many different nationalities live together in the same city but have different values and lifestyles. It is possible to attract attention and conflict because of misunderstanding each other. For instance, the local stores might worry that migrants cannot speak their language and choose not to serve them. Furthermore, some people could be affected by stereotypes such as dress or appearance and being rude or unfriendly at school or in the workplace. As a result, despite immigration bringing diverse cultures into societies, it also causes discrimination.

To sum up, this essay has argued that immigration has an important impact on modern society creating multiculturalism, but it also discriminate in certain cultures.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ersity. On the other hand, people of many different nationalities live together in the same...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'discriminates'?
Suggestion: discriminates
... creating multiculturalism, but it also discriminate in certain cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37154150198 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27128054178 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584980237154 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2002347836 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159078508313 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626756971549 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639262701004 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113441233089 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777666209651 0.056905535591 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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