Immigration has a major impact on the society.
What are the main reasons of immigration?
To what consequences can it lead?
Migration to other countries is a common trend these days. Each day more and more people migrate to other countries, which has a significant impact on the society. This essay will first discuss why people are migrating and then elaborate the results associated with this problem, followed by a logical conclusion.
One of the predominant causes, that compel a person to shift to another country, is the desire of getting better employment opportunities. People are seen migrating to affluent countries, which means that they are attracted by the well paid jobs in those countries. Another reason for the same is the desire of leading a quality life. A lot of people from developing and under developed countries leave their home country in order to live in developed countries with less population to improve their quality of life. This can be example by a growing number of Indians who are migrating to Canada for the sake of better life.
However such a trend causes problems for both the migrants and the countries of their destination. First of all persons, who cross boundaries to find jobs in other countries, fail to find attractive and well rewarding employment facilities because of lack of language skills and difficulties in adaptation. Therefore, countries have to run various Refugee assistant programs to help those people which cause a burden on the financial resources of the host country. For instance, American Government has to spend 5% of its net national income every year to support the migrants.
To conclude, while people migrate to find a better life prospectus such a situation sometimes leads to more problems than solutions to the them and host countries. Hence, it is very important to consider all the possible outcomes and then decide about the leaving home country.
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- Immigration has a major impact on the society What are the main reasons of immigration To what consequences can it lead 84
- 7 Today most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion To what extent do you support this development 73
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09121621622 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74463875768 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6161725103 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.642857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0323864192896 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0141805250073 0.084324248473 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270752314588 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0199488645611 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013834546619 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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