The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take?
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?
It is true that excessive use of the mobile phone has caused social and medical problems to many in recent times, but simultaneously, it has also helped tremendously in improving businesses and communication. However, to stay at a brighter side, there needs to be a certain balance of the time consumed for mobile phones as well as the knowledge of ethics of using a mobile phone.
One of the major troubles of using mobile is an addiction. These days they come loaded with the innumerous amount of entertainment and informative applications. One cannot get sufficed with its contents, ultimately resulting in excessive usage. The multiplayer games, all types of support applications keeps a person constantly connected to their devices. Due to the continuous interaction, people have reported suffering from weakening such as eyesight, neck pain. Even parents are allowing their young ones from the age of 2-3 to use mobile phones and there have been reported situations of nerve damage in them due to excessive use. These kinds of problems can be prevented with responsible usage.
Another major issue caused by mobile phones is social media rampage. With easy access to communication and the ability to express our opinions to a larger audience, social media platforms have enabled a good number of people to express their rage about every day issues. Many of these are either based on a political, regional or religious basis, causing the people of inverse belief to burst their fits of anger. This results in social media wars in the form of huge articles, abusive comments and threats Though these issues might not look as scary as a battle, they do have an absolutely wrecking impact on the mental health of the victims. This causes people to go depressed, anxious and scared about their present or future. But with good conduct of social media ethics like teaching people to respect opinions, allowing free speech and understanding emotions these problems can be controlled to a large extent. Platforms of social media should run a filter of inspection to counter hatred in general.
Summarizing, the use of mobile phone and social media can be moralized with proper awareness of its benefits, limitations and ethics.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
It is true that excessive use of the mob...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, so, well, in general, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13114754098 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7634461126 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3562162559 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.470588235 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27927146001 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857632537396 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750742219526 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185044613339 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650514992991 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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