The increase in mobile phones use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take?
Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
There is an adage, which says fire and water are good servants, but bad masters, I think, mobile phones also should be added as the third element, which serves as a good servant, but is a bad master. The off springs of technology are many, right from computes, to mobile phones, smart TV’s, smart watches and now, the entire home right from the refrigerator to the lights and fans can be connected to the internet and can be operated upon a simple tap through the mobile.
Mobile phones have revolutionized human life to such an extent that, our life revolves around it from the moment we wake up till our eyes doze off. It has pushed boundaries, broken barriers and has shrunk the world into our palm, providing easy access to business, communication and entertainment. But there is always another side to a coin; nothing can be loaded with goodness only and so is the case with mobile phones. The radiation being exhibited not only from the phone, but also from the network towers, has been a long standing concern, which many leading personas in the medical field, indicate is the primary reason for the increase in cancer patients. The other effects include, strain to the eyes, strain to the locomotive muscles located in the hands, bending of neck and so on. To top it all, there are also psychological issues, like attention disorder, social isolation, becoming drawn into oneself and so on.
I quote from the old Tamil classic Thirukural, written by Thiruvalluvar, that anything in excess, even if it’s a good thing, is bad for oneself. So is the case with Mobile phones, though their benefits and advantages outweigh the negatives, but still the disadvantages speak for themselves and are definitely not worth ignoring.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 425, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d so is the case with mobile phones. The radiation being exhibited not only from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, third, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88851351351 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6341452576 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614864864865 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9505873305 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.7 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170063222412 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587935695264 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351577437699 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105224474146 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376589485315 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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