The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?
Human has come to a new millennium of technology. With the advance of the internet, people can have access to all information. To an extent, I believe that the improvement of the internet is a great step for all mankind.
The internet has become the most important factor of daily basis. Firstly, people can search for almost everything they do not have the information about on the internet. Just by a single click, people will receive a million of pages that conclude the knowledge they want; unlike a decade ago when they would have to go to the library and still didn't find any information. Secondly, if users are not satisfied, they can also ask others for help without having to go meeting in person since the internet provides connection between people from anywhere in the world. This is the reason why the internet is an essential part of human life.
However, there are some downsides when using the internet. One big issue is that parents cannot fully control the contents that their children view. Although there are some software that help prevent this problem, but it seems that they still cannot keep the children from watching inappropriate contents 100 percent. Moreover, internet users always have a risk to be attacked by hackers. All of their private information could be exposed when they get hacked without any notice when surfing the internet. These are some drawbacks of getting on the internet.
In conclusion, despite some downsides, I believe that the internet is giving us a great opportunity to gain access to a huge world of knowledge that we could not in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...uld have to go to the library and still didnt find any information. Secondly, if user...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88644688645 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56746508983 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9983006253 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16765264246 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621938760549 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461943229329 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114031714711 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414193894971 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.