There has been an upward trend regarding people awake time in many regions. This phenomenon might have emerged from several reasons which will be discussed in this essay. The consequence of this habit, however, seems to be more important to debate on.
In today's business world, workers and employers are asked to put more time for the work to be done. It is hardly acceptable by the employees that an employer leaves the workplace without completing their tasks. The outcome of this issue is that people who work for employees might have less time for doing other personal pieces of stuff like sleeping. Moreover, the nightlife has become very appealing especially for the youngsters. In many countries, there are many activates that are open just at nights such as many clubs and cinemas. Also, people have much more enjoyable things rather than sleeping in homes. For example, they can spend the night playing video games, chatting with the loved ones and checking Facebook and other social media sites. Therefore, people might cut the sleeping part of their life to take care of other aforementioned issues.
This trend might have some drastic effect both on the person and the society they are living in. Firstly, the immediate impact of lack of sleeping will result in a higher level of stress and less efficiency in the workplace. Scientists have argued that an adult needs at least 7 hours of sleeping daily. Considering these facts, the more an individual has less sleeping time, the more the level of anxiety would be.
The society, secondly, will be affected by the issue as well. In other words, there can be no sharp and growing country when all the workforces are suffering from sleepless days. In fact, the tiredness of any individual will shape a tired society which has no energy to go forward. Japanese people in 90th are the example of a tired society when the rate of committing suicide had grown unbelievably because of work pressure and lack of resting time.
To conclude, although many new tasks and entertainments have emerged in the recent years which seems more important and enjoyable rather than sleeping among people, the human biology has some limits which prevent us to ask more from it. Otherwise, the human being will face some frustrating result.
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- Topic:In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels health and fitness is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 67
- People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less?What effect does it have in on an individual and the society? 78
- Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behaviour. Do you agree or dis 78
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...the more the level of anxiety would be. The society, secondly, will be affected ...
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...eing will face some frustrating result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, at least, for example, in fact, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94545454545 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44001885695 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0074125173 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0545733083465 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.018256199825 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0244271186012 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.034685759113 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203034811479 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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